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Sunday September 29th

Location: Rome, Italy

File: Marie Engel

Chip Type: Spirit

War is upon us. By the Renia and I arrived in Rome, we knew this wasn’t going to be simple. There were two camps set up, each heavily fortified with machine guns and mortars. But it seemed like we were out gunned. We only had human artillery. No tanks, no trucks. Unlike Midnight Eye who seems to have an endless supply. “Marie! They're beginning to advance again!” Renia says, running out of a tent. “Right, then transform quickly.” I say turning toward the battlefield. Renia jumps in the air, after a blinding flash, a long purple sword falls in my hands. I look into the blade and see Renia’s face. “Let’s move we don’t want to miss all of the fun.” Renia says, in a playful way. She knows the hell that we are going to endure. I walk to the edge of the hill, and we can see the hell has begun without us. Rifles are fired, men are falling. Some are torn up by shrapnel, giving them a slow painful death. I close my eyes, and calm down… the next events are a blur. My feet skip ahead of me, and I'm running down the hill at full speed. A bullet whizzes past my ear, and my heart nearly stops. I dash behind an enemy soldier, and slash his back. He falls to the ground, limp I don’t turn back; I keep running toward their camp. Another soldier comes at me with a knife. I stab Renia right through her gut. She screams in pain, and I freeze. Her scream was bloodcurdling, and the sound of gurgling in her chest prevents me from moving any further. This girl… she probably wasn’t any older than 15. When she hits the ground, and the screaming stops, I look away. “Marie, what’s wrong?” Renia says to me. “She was young, she had a life… she didn’t need to die like this…” I stand silently, and pick a few flowers and lay them over the girls’ corpse. Silence surrounds the hill. By the time I realise it’s too late. “Marie… quick, we need to get out of here. Now!” Renia yells. Everyone else is gone, the battlefield is empty. The hill feels as if it’s getting steeper and steeper. In the next five seconds, I wish I’d never come back. The sky sounds like its screaming, followed by a bright flash. Then nothing, just… white. Then, color starts to come back. I’m looking at the sky, and a man is leaning over me. He has a red cross on his shoulder, meaning that he is a medic. My body is screaming in pain, and I look to see what is going on. My chest is torn open, and my leg is crushed. The medic is working feverishly on me, and I look over to my right and see Renia. She has shrapnel sticking out of her body… her face is red, and she’s missing her right arm. She took the explosion for me; she put her life in danger for me. Then I remember the medic working on me. We’re going to survive this chapter of hell. Until a shot rings out. The medic’s eyes go wide and he falls backwards down the hill. “No… no, no! This can’t be happening” I plead. All of the other medics have cleared the hill. The shot must have scared them off, and now we’re all alone. I plead, and cry for help, but no one came. I can’t bear to look at Renia. I cry out his name, the one who treats me as family. I call out for Poll, but still, no one comes. I close my eyes, and give up. Until suddenly, I feel lifted into the air, I jolt my eyes open, and see an enemy soldier carrying Renia and I. I freeze in fear, I don’t know what to do, and I would rather die than be taken to them. I try kicking him, to loosen his grip. “Don’t worry it is okay. I will take you back to your own side; they will fix you up yes?” I look up at his face, and all I can make out are his grey eyes. A mask is covering his mouth and nose. I try to thank him, but no sound comes out.  When we get back, the others look shocked. I feel so happy that I've lived through this. I begin to close my eyes…  I think I deserve a little nap…
FINNALY. FINISHED. Took me long enough... so sorry for the wait though guys.
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GamerNationBrianna Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like trains .3.

Naruto Dancing pedobear vs tard D: Pedotrolled 

pedobear plays guitar  Lol hes playin the fire and the flame XDD
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MarcoEmma Dec 6, 2013  Student Writer
Awesome!!! :D :D
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:iconcometstarking:
Thank you :D It too me way too long to finish though...
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MarcoEmma Dec 6, 2013  Student Writer
Why? :?
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:iconcometstarking:
School. The problem now is... I have what I wanna write after Christmas, but Now I don't know what to write leading up to it XD
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MarcoEmma Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
Do you have to write something leading up to it? Can't the story stand alone? XD
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:iconcometstarking:
Nope XD. There are quite a few things leading up to it, and plus, it hasn't happened yet. See how there's a real life date in the top of this story? X3
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MarcoEmma Dec 7, 2013  Student Writer
Oh. XD You need to get thinking.
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:iconcometstarking:
OMG I had a dream last night and I have a sub part now o3o
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